As her eyes met the reflection of his, his hands swept up from where they rested at her waist. She watched as her body began to respond to his touch, watched as one hand left to fan possessively across her abdomen and her mouth part at the sheer eroticism of that simple gesture. As his hands moved over her, she saw herself through his eyes.
21 comments:
Prose as beautiful and seductive as the goddess who penned them! :-)
Oh, J, my sweet ghato, you sure do know how please me! :-D
love the picture you found to go with this piece, you paint a great visual with this one my friend (just taking a break from the portfolio, computer is behaving so thought I would leave a comment now LOL)
"As her eyes met the reflection of his"
Wonderful, wonderful turn of phrase. I could just read that one small bit over and over again, so very evocative. Perfect prose for a beautiful painting. Excellent work!
You write about love...I write about breaking up. Good combo of good and evil. ;o)
Just wanted to dorp in and say "HI."
I am writing again - another day - another boy - another problem - another search for my soul. :-)
Yours words are beautiful I will pretend this is what my Friday that I can't remember was like....
Sara, I'm so happy to know you are okay!!! More catch up at your place, xo
Linny, would be perfect, were it not for the fact that one is real and one is fake :-)
Trée, that was the reason I decided to post it, reminded me of the discussion in comments from the other day about seeing oneself through other people's eyes. Thank you.
Hey Trace, hope the portfolio made quick progress and that the comp continues to be nice :-) Talk to you soon, xo
**As his hands moved over her, she saw herself through his eyes.
loved that the BEST Autumn! WOW!
Keshi.
btw did I tell ya ur a beautiful temptress? ;-)
Keshi.
:-) I like that line too, I see several different things in it.
Thank you most kindly, Keshi!
this is beautiful.
hi! i've been busy. i chose to leave my message here because you might change your mind and erase the latest again. anyway, have a nice day autumn!
Sorry, Isay, I know that has happened once of twice. Sometimes when I see the post so visibly, it doesn't feel right anymore.
Busy is most often good, so hoping all is well with you. Wishing you a nice day also, xo
Ooooh, that's hott! :)
:-)
Such a perfect picture to go with the snippet of desire... very well done Autumn.
Thanks Terry :-)
Ooh my.
:-)
Hey Ms M, hope you are doing well!
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